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Alford  Wayman's avatar

Colt is a huge liability so much so the inexperienced Cry is on his own and also needs to worry about the companion that was sent with him might kill him off? I now wnat Cry to give the sage and father figure back at the men's camp holy heck for sending him out there with that moron. The father figure should have held somthing of value over Buck to have him take Cry instead and return. They could have fought for and with each other the whole way out and back. Which could be practice for the mating duel. The trip back seems more intence then the trip to the women's camp. Did they take another rout? Nice job you got me hooked! I'm vaction and catching up on stack reads! Going to next section! Hooray!

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Pages After Dark's avatar

This was really good! Great writing that keeps the readers engaged. Now I’ll have to check out the previous chapters. Keep writing, fellow writer!

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