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Ares Aurelian's avatar

I love where this is going. 🤔💕🎶💰🌙🤯

D.S. Brandt, Author Goblin's avatar

"To be continued..."

I knew you wouldn't leave it at 2 parts 😏

Kathrine Elaine's avatar

I foolishly hoped I could but… I have only a rough plot in my head, and I never really know how much it will take to write it all down. I never write outlines. Because I’ve tried and it just kills the excitement of writing for me. Plus each story comes with its own rhythm, mood. This one goes slow. I don’t mind. It will take as long as it will take.😑

D.S. Brandt, Author Goblin's avatar

This is exactly why I rarely state how many parts a story will be unless it’s written ahead of time.

Nevena Pascaleva's avatar

Wow, a nice love story is brewing here....:)

Kathrine Elaine's avatar

Thank you so much for reading my stuff! I’m happy you enjoyed reading because I genuinely enjoy writing it. ☺️

Alford  Wayman's avatar

Nice job! Enjoyed the part where the lady was disguised as a man and was helping her father. You are showing me though words and description the scene. I pick up that the older lady was a medicine women. When he asked what was in the cup I knew hewould not get an answer. Love here in the environment what is suppose to make you better tastes bitter. Somthing about mandrakes comes to mind for some reason. Cant wait for more parts!