Less descriptors can be good (some may be necessary); we are imagining the most immersive scene possible just by picturing them together. This is wonderful.
I dunno why but I cracked up at "The wolverine is following us!" :D And the couple is so cute. This is such a fun read. Also, louring confused me. I think you meant luring.
“Wolverine” might sound weird but it’s a creature from Latvian folklore called “Sumpurnis” which translates as “Dogmuzzle”. I used “wolverine” because it sounds less comical. The creature is trully gruesome - a human with dog’s/wolves head. Not really a werewolf. Because werewolves are able to transform, whereas the creatures I describe cannot.
Sorry for the info dump. I have a lot of fantasy lore living rent-free in my head.😂
This story cries out for a happy ending.
Yes, please!
Big time. I already love these two :D
The world you create is so alive…
Thank you so much. 🥹 Strangely enough, I think my writing lacks descriptions. I give as little as I can, because I just want to tell what’s happening.
The characters make the setting.🙂
Less descriptors can be good (some may be necessary); we are imagining the most immersive scene possible just by picturing them together. This is wonderful.
I dunno why but I cracked up at "The wolverine is following us!" :D And the couple is so cute. This is such a fun read. Also, louring confused me. I think you meant luring.
Sorry, fixed it. I make the dumbest mistakes!🙈
“Wolverine” might sound weird but it’s a creature from Latvian folklore called “Sumpurnis” which translates as “Dogmuzzle”. I used “wolverine” because it sounds less comical. The creature is trully gruesome - a human with dog’s/wolves head. Not really a werewolf. Because werewolves are able to transform, whereas the creatures I describe cannot.
Sorry for the info dump. I have a lot of fantasy lore living rent-free in my head.😂
That's awesome! Thank you Latvia! :D It's especially funny how you couldn't hide the comical XD But dogmuzzle woulda killed me