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E.A. Colquitt's avatar

'With all the rejections I'm receiving for this story' - is this the one you're sending to traditional publishers? (I remember something about you sending something to traditional publishers... can't remember which story you meant, though!)

Okay, so bear in mind that I haven't started approaching traditional publishers yet - but I have a degree in Creative Writing, which included (basic) advice on approaching said publishers.

What I was taught is something that apparently doesn't really change in the industry: it's very, very competitive out there, so writers need to get their work as good as they can ON THEIR OWN (apologies for the capital letters; I am not angry. Oh, if I could just use italics in these comments...).

I can see things here that you are capable of sorting out yourself - punctuation edits, mostly.

On a more personal note, I would like clearer boundaries between the different scenes within your chapters.

Now for the best news: you consistently produce enjoyable reads - even for readers who don't usually read stories in your natural style (er, me. Your style is NSFW compared with what I usually read lol). You've got a fleshed-out setting (including the map - I have been working on my own settings for literally years. It's HARD), interesting characters, and an engaging style.

It's tough out there, but you're on the right track. Keep going :)

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The Man Behind the Screen's avatar

Once again, I'm hooked. You've got a talent for writing engaging characters with a lot of hidden layers to them. As if my reading list wasn't big enough, now I've got this to look forward to, also!

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