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Shadia Alfan's avatar

This is beautiful... I find myself going back to the past chapters and reading it all again and again. Can't wait for more.

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Joseph L. Wiess's avatar

Grief has turned the king's heart to stone.

He no longer knows love, just anger and strife

If he kills his daughter, no love will he get from his wife.

Any woman worth her love would stick him in the gut

and a lot more for allowing the wolf to rut.

The kingdom is evil, it deserves to fall

Can it be saved? Is it worth it all?

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