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The Man Behind the Screen's avatar

Well that escalated quickly!

One big detail that I love here, one that adds a very genuine feel to the family tension, is how the parents are refusing to listen to Thymia's claims. She knows she's telling the truth, and we know because we've read it, but due to a mixture of past prejudices and what honestly is some pretty logical thinking, even if it is unfair towards Erko, they've convinced themselves that she can't possibly be right. While this is certainly an extreme case, I think it's safe to say most of us have experienced something like that once or twice when we were young, too. Maybe we witnessed it, maybe we were on the receiving end, but the way you handle that here feels very accurate to that experience. It's not malicious by intent, but it feels that way to the child who isn't being listened to, and that comes across well here.

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Jeannine Lawall's avatar

The women are taking over, all will be well! 😁

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