Nice job with this! I love the themes and motifs! I suspect he will want to go home one day maybe. Will she let him? Will she go with him? Do they have a reason to ever leave? Will he ever tire of "Calypso's Island"? Will he give up his mission of teaching dance to be with the lady there? Or will he be called away and her heart be broken like some "Dido"? So many questions!!!!!!!
"the beauty of sunset on this island was indescribable." - Telling us, but I would like to have this unseen background shown, described in a short paragraph at least, to set my mood and mind into their world of this chapter.
Nice light-hearted fantasy romance. Thank you, Kathrine Elaine.
I kind of did a paragraph prior: “…the magnificent orange, red and gold of the sky poured into the ocean. Gold everywhere, gold dancing on the waves. The sky leaned over the ocean, they weaved in the nearness of passionate lovers, a beauty Giacomo had never seen before. “
By the way, did you leave a review on The Last Daughter of Wolves on Amazon? I kinda guess it was you. If so, thank you for the kind words and recommendation. But a clarification is in order - although my stories here on Substack are not polished, The Last Daughter of Wolves was specifically polished by a professional editor which I hired. I think she did a good job. I’m a bit disappointed if it seems unpolished.
I would like to read more about these two.
Nice job with this! I love the themes and motifs! I suspect he will want to go home one day maybe. Will she let him? Will she go with him? Do they have a reason to ever leave? Will he ever tire of "Calypso's Island"? Will he give up his mission of teaching dance to be with the lady there? Or will he be called away and her heart be broken like some "Dido"? So many questions!!!!!!!
He did indeed find his paradise. Lovely story.
Thank you 🩶
Awww... what a sweet read first thing in the morning!
Thank you for reading it!☺️
"the beauty of sunset on this island was indescribable." - Telling us, but I would like to have this unseen background shown, described in a short paragraph at least, to set my mood and mind into their world of this chapter.
Nice light-hearted fantasy romance. Thank you, Kathrine Elaine.
I kind of did a paragraph prior: “…the magnificent orange, red and gold of the sky poured into the ocean. Gold everywhere, gold dancing on the waves. The sky leaned over the ocean, they weaved in the nearness of passionate lovers, a beauty Giacomo had never seen before. “
By the way, did you leave a review on The Last Daughter of Wolves on Amazon? I kinda guess it was you. If so, thank you for the kind words and recommendation. But a clarification is in order - although my stories here on Substack are not polished, The Last Daughter of Wolves was specifically polished by a professional editor which I hired. I think she did a good job. I’m a bit disappointed if it seems unpolished.
Anyway, thank you for reading and commenting.🙂
I liked it. Thank you, Elaine.👍