I don't know what the publisher was looking for, but this is definitely imaginative. I've never seen this combination of elements before. It also draws a reader in. I want to know how this all works out.
There's obviously more to the circus than meets the eye...
That was so unique. The story really gets going once we start to pick up on Odyr's strangeness. You included so many interesting characters. The one mysterious redhead, I wonder what role she will play? Her doll like eyes and dolls in Odyr's past latched on to my curiosity? Whatever the case, I'm intrigued. But it's all dependent on how Oddity deals with the trouble that ended the chapter. Great world and story so far.
I don't know what the publisher was looking for, but this is definitely imaginative. I've never seen this combination of elements before. It also draws a reader in. I want to know how this all works out.
There's obviously more to the circus than meets the eye...
That was so unique. The story really gets going once we start to pick up on Odyr's strangeness. You included so many interesting characters. The one mysterious redhead, I wonder what role she will play? Her doll like eyes and dolls in Odyr's past latched on to my curiosity? Whatever the case, I'm intrigued. But it's all dependent on how Oddity deals with the trouble that ended the chapter. Great world and story so far.