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David Perlmutter's avatar

Creepy as hell- well done.

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Kathrine Elaine's avatar

Thanks 🩶

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Nick Buchheit's avatar

Damn. You did warn me but this was dark. I really dug it though. It feels like some commentary on our own dopamine addiction to writing and social media. Great vehicle for that. Bravo!!!

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Kathrine Elaine's avatar

Thank you. Substack/social media did serve as the inspiration. Of course, I exaggerated it. But there is dark stuff even here.🫣

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S M Garratt's avatar

Great pacing, and I loved the ending - something way scarier when the chaos is in the mind and not for real.

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Feasts and Fables's avatar

Dark, dark … but the words did it … and the readers, it was the damn readers!

Excellent trip to the dark side.

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Kathrine Elaine's avatar

Thank you. It is dark, indeed.

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Benjamin McCoy's avatar

Brilliant. Displaying our own navel gazing and echo chambers in a most extreme and macabre way.

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Kathrine Elaine's avatar

Thanks🩶

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