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David Perlmutter's avatar

Creepy as hell- well done.

James Ross's avatar

Glorious.

James Ross's avatar

You deserve it. The story was like a shard of black light, witnessed by a madman.

Kathrine Elaine's avatar

What a beautiful comment… don’t know if I deserved it but I sure needed it.🩶

Nick Buchheit's avatar

Damn. You did warn me but this was dark. I really dug it though. It feels like some commentary on our own dopamine addiction to writing and social media. Great vehicle for that. Bravo!!!

Kathrine Elaine's avatar

Thank you. Substack/social media did serve as the inspiration. Of course, I exaggerated it. But there is dark stuff even here.🫣

S M Garratt's avatar

Great pacing, and I loved the ending - something way scarier when the chaos is in the mind and not for real.

Feasts and Fables's avatar

Dark, dark … but the words did it … and the readers, it was the damn readers!

Excellent trip to the dark side.

Kathrine Elaine's avatar

Thank you. It is dark, indeed.

Benjamin McCoy's avatar

Brilliant. Displaying our own navel gazing and echo chambers in a most extreme and macabre way.