14 Comments
User's avatar
Matthew Sutcliffe's avatar

Short, weird and clean.

You left out unexpected.

Expand full comment
Kathrine Elaine's avatar

How unexpected?😅

Expand full comment
Matthew Sutcliffe's avatar

Maybe you’re contagious. My microdose today was a little off-kilter for me, influenced by you, obviously. SO to see your flash fiction and … so lovely.

(It is lovely, seriously, and I am not corrupted by you really. Honest. )

Expand full comment
Kathrine Elaine's avatar

You mean I’m like a virus?!🤨

I’ll take that as a compliment. Thank you.☺️

Expand full comment
Jeannine Lawall's avatar

You left out sweet, too. 🤗

Expand full comment
James Ross's avatar

“I’ve been invisible for years. Good girls don’t need much attention.” 😢

Expand full comment
Tracy's avatar

This is one of my favorite pieces you have written! Go nerd-love!!! 🥰🥰

Expand full comment
Kathrine Elaine's avatar

Thank you.🩶 I nearly didn’t finish the story. I’m glad I did.

Expand full comment
Tracy's avatar

Me too! The way you pulled the grayness in the puddle consuming her with hopelessness into the grayness in his eyes promising so much more was genius- nicely done, Kathrine! 💕

Expand full comment
Kathrine Elaine's avatar

❤️

Expand full comment
Amanda V Shane's avatar

Beautiful! 🥹

Expand full comment
Kathrine Elaine's avatar

Thank you ☺️

Expand full comment
Melissa Dawn Goldsmith's avatar

I’m crying!

Expand full comment
Nevena Pascaleva's avatar

Gorgeous descriptions! I felt the weight of the rain on me - and the lightness of the expected sunlight! 😊

Expand full comment