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Caitriana NicNeacail's avatar

That ending was so beautiful 💔

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svndavn's avatar

This was a lovely ending. It took me on such a beautiful journey

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Kathrine Elaine's avatar

Thank you 🩶

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Jeannine's avatar

Beautiful. You made me cry, but that's okay. I've been needing to cry for a long time... thank you.

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Kathrine Elaine's avatar

Thank you for reading 🩶

I cried too.

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Ben Woestenburg's avatar

I like how you ended it. Very beautiful and tender. I applaud you! Loved it.

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Kathrine Elaine's avatar

Thank you 🩶

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Joseph L. Wiess's avatar

That was a sweet story. In the end they saved each other. Very poignant.

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Kathrine Elaine's avatar

Thank you for reading it 🩶

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Jason Duck's avatar

Loved it- thanks for sharing.

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Bill Adler's avatar

I love the contrast between the heatwave and sea the ending.

This is a wonderful story.

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Kathrine Elaine's avatar

Thank you 🩶

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