A romantic flash fiction.
Wow! That was a small hurricane!
That was awesome! Felt like I was actually in the sea while reading it.
Thank you 🩶
Powerfully written, and a well-executed couple of twists in a fairly short story, great work!
Woah that’s powerful! Loved your writing here ✨
Nicely done piece of flash! 🌊
Thank you. The funny thing is, that guy I wrote it for (who won that little contest I did on Notes) hasn’t said anything. I guess he doesn’t like it.🤷♀️
I really love this! However, I'm going to be cheeky and channel my poetry mentor - do you really need that last line? :)
Thank you 🩶 Hm… maybe you’re right.
Sometimes we fall prey to the need to wrap things up neatly. Some times it's needed.
I admit that I don't always do what she says.....
Loved how this evolved in such a small time frame. The ending is haunting. Amazing work!
Wow! That was a small hurricane!
That was awesome! Felt like I was actually in the sea while reading it.
Thank you 🩶
Powerfully written, and a well-executed couple of twists in a fairly short story, great work!
Woah that’s powerful! Loved your writing here ✨
Thank you 🩶
Nicely done piece of flash! 🌊
Thank you. The funny thing is, that guy I wrote it for (who won that little contest I did on Notes) hasn’t said anything. I guess he doesn’t like it.🤷♀️
I really love this! However, I'm going to be cheeky and channel my poetry mentor - do you really need that last line? :)
Thank you 🩶 Hm… maybe you’re right.
Sometimes we fall prey to the need to wrap things up neatly. Some times it's needed.
I admit that I don't always do what she says.....
Loved how this evolved in such a small time frame. The ending is haunting. Amazing work!