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The Man Behind the Screen's avatar

Snakeling plots must take after the serpents which are their lineage. This story coils and twists as their bodies do! It's amazing that you were able to work so much complexity into this situation in such a short time. I've often run into the issue of shorter stories with winding plots like these feeling rushed, which often leaves the plot itself either feeling shallow or overly complex. That's not the case here at all. Every element works wonderfully here, each one playing off the others in a multilayered contest of wills. Best of all, the characters still remain the driving forces in this story, with the plot servicing them instead of the other way around, thus helping the entire situation feel more genuine. Wonderful work!

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Amanda V Shane's avatar

The plot thickens! Now, I want to know what happens next.

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