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Mariska Burger's avatar

Oh dear!!

A most unfortunate situation.

Looking forward to what’s going to happen next.🫣

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Carefulrogue's avatar

>“Do you wish to observe a lady empty her bladder?!” Gema asked plainly. She could feel them blush even under their scarves. The soldiers released Gema from the ropes, and blanket, and they blushed even harder,

Did Avem send their greenest recruits? Soldiers are not known to be the most chaste and bashful.

>“Do not dare to touch me! Don’t! Do not!” Gema said sternly, and the look in her eyes did indeed stop the vile men; Gema was a queen from head to toes, and no one could deny it.

Cut it down to just the first "Do not dare touch me!" The repetitions feel like she lacks command.

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