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Horace Wah-Pole's avatar

"memorize every inch of her" - that wouldnt be too hard to do, if she was two inches tall. A mouse to be precise.

"A mouse!?"

"Yes, I am!" And she charges at him!

"Aah!" Thud!

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Kathrine Elaine's avatar

I was trying to be poetic. Kinda. 😅 Exploring how weird can I go before going totally absurd. I hate absurd stuff.🤔

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Larry Edge's avatar

Enjoyed this very much. Beautiful and wonderfully told. Take care!

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Kathrine Elaine's avatar

Thank you 🩶

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Dave Wise (Neoteric Wood Art)'s avatar

There is room for most everything on Substack, but in my view, this sweet, short story is what best suits the format and as a user-friendly and easy to access place for authors to showcase their prowess that would have gone unnoticed on other platforms. I love writing such as this one, not too long, no vulgarity, plenty of mild tension, and a whimsical journey to a place we might all want to visit.

My hat is off to you Kathrine, you made me smile and left a delicious aftertaste in my mind. I think you for that.

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Kathrine Elaine's avatar

Thank you for reading! I’m glad you enjoyed it.🩶

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Derek James Kritzberg's avatar

DREADed

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Kathrine Elaine's avatar

Excellent!😂

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Terrance Ó Domhnaill's avatar

Sweet story in a kind of weird way.

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Jeannine's avatar

Oh, that was a sweet one! Grandmas and Moms know best. 😎

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