I figured you might think, I might misunderstand your comment! Not to worry, I knew you meant the rebels.😅 I overthink everything, though. I know the writing itself feels a bit clunky in this one. I’ll try to do better next time (and improve this one. I might submit it to a journal when it’s done).
I have that problem, too. Sometimes I lie awake at night, worrying about stupid stuff, like possibly having accidentally upset the checkout person at the grocery store. My husband tells me that normal people forget incidents like that minutes layer, but of course I'm not normal. 😂
I think the basic plot is good, and am curious to see where you're going with it. And of course, as usual, your characters are awesome, and I want to know more about them and hope that they'll be okay. IMHO, this one would be worth polishing up for submission. 💜
Ouch! This is so disrespectful of the Rebels.
Yep, you were right, this IS getting worse.
I meant the rebel plot, not the story, btw, but I figured you knew that. 🤣
I figured you might think, I might misunderstand your comment! Not to worry, I knew you meant the rebels.😅 I overthink everything, though. I know the writing itself feels a bit clunky in this one. I’ll try to do better next time (and improve this one. I might submit it to a journal when it’s done).
I have that problem, too. Sometimes I lie awake at night, worrying about stupid stuff, like possibly having accidentally upset the checkout person at the grocery store. My husband tells me that normal people forget incidents like that minutes layer, but of course I'm not normal. 😂
I think the basic plot is good, and am curious to see where you're going with it. And of course, as usual, your characters are awesome, and I want to know more about them and hope that they'll be okay. IMHO, this one would be worth polishing up for submission. 💜