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Terrance Ó Domhnaill's avatar

Your wonderful story is now out on the podcast. I am letting all of my writers know that as of this week, this podcast/audio book has now exceeded over a thousand downloads in Substack and thousands more across other applications, most notably Spotify and it's subsidiaries, around the world. I couldn't do it without you. Thank you.

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Kathrine Elaine's avatar

Thank you so much! It sounds really good! Thank you for doing this.🩶

I found it through youtube, would it be okay with you if I shared it here on Substack, in my Notes?

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Terrance Ó Domhnaill's avatar

Absolutely. That is what that is for. I want everyone to share it with the world.

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Terrance Ó Domhnaill's avatar

Joseph Wiess recommended that I read this and I am glad he did. Would you allow me to read this for my podcast in a couple of weeks? I produce a podcast where I read short fictional stories from writers, and add sound effects to make the stories sound better to a listening audience. This is strictly an audio podcast that comes out every Friday. Look for Crann na beatha Stories and Poetry here on Substack, my web page at www.crann-na-beatha.com, or any mobile app. Each show is approximately thirty minutes long. If you have or plan to write more like this, let me know I will read them also.

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Kathrine Elaine's avatar

Wow, that would be fantastic! Thank you! I have 7 short chapters here on Substack, I’m releasing a chapter every Friday, so there should be more in a couple of weeks. If you need a longer story, my SciFi story “The Expedition” (6k words approx) is also happening in the same universe as The Gravediggers. But it’s a romance, so… just a suggestion. Anyway, thank you and good luck! I’ll add the link to The Expedition, but just ignore it if you don’t like it. The Gravedigger story is more interesting.

https://open.substack.com/pub/kathrineelaine/p/the-expedition-745?r=2rhgsy&utm_campaign=post&utm_medium=web&showWelcomeOnShare=true

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Terrance Ó Domhnaill's avatar

I will take a look this weekend and let you know what I think. What I look for is readability and can I add in sound effects without detracting from the story itself. If it is too long, I have trouble maintaining listener interest. I can do serialized chapters. I am nearly through one right now. Again, I will look and let you know which will work best and let you know. Thank you.

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Kathrine Elaine's avatar

Yes, of course. Add the sound effects. Have a good weekend!

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Michael Woudenberg's avatar

I like it. Two quick notes.

1. Rewarding is spelled wrong in the second to last paragraph

2. When you edit that one, you should drop a link at the end for Part 2

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Kathrine Elaine's avatar

Thank you!🩶 I’ll have to fix that.

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Ryan Schneider's avatar

Have you thought about expanding this? i.e. what happened next? Don't fret about not being a tech person. Really, really hard sci-fi like that can get a bit tedious. Remember, real toads in imaginary gardens. Consider The Martian. Super techy and detailed, right? Some say that's what made it cool. And I would agree. But some people HATED it. Like my mom. Which I understood.

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Kathrine Elaine's avatar

Yes, I have some ideas. I might be writing and sharing the story as a series of flash fiction pieces, on Sci-Fridays. I have one longer Sci-fi story, happening in the same universe. If you want, you can check it out (and see all the terrible ways I screwed up writing tech stuff 😅) or don’t read it, if you don’t feel like it.

https://open.substack.com/pub/kathrineelaine/p/the-expedition-745?r=2rhgsy&utm_campaign=post&utm_medium=web&showWelcomeOnShare=true

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V Kelly-Sibley's avatar

Cool! very, very cool!

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Joyce's avatar

Wow Kathrine, that is a great piece of Sci-Fi. Never again say that it’s not your forte! Well done. 👏👏👏

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Kathrine Elaine's avatar

Thank you... I’m always shy to use technical terms, I’m tech stupid, and Sci-Fi is all about futuristic technologies, that’s why I don’t feel confident writing this. Though it still was fun.

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Joyce's avatar

Well, don’t hide your light under a bushel, Kathrine. I’ve often read your work and thought I could never word it like you do.

And this was fine!

Black Knight writes lots of Sci-Fi, and he likes it, so write some more in this style 💙

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Bill Hiatt's avatar

Definitely creative! Also, you manage a lot in a small amount of text.

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Lique's avatar

You write some interesting pieces that I would have never thought that anyone 'thought' about things like this.

Good works!

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The Black Knight's avatar

I liked it :)

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RW Span's avatar

I really like this little story. Nicely done! Thanks for sharing.

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Kathrine Elaine's avatar

Thank you so much!🩶

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