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As always, desire gets one of them in trouble. Court should be interesting....

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Nice read before bedtime Katherine! I look forward to tge next chapters in this series!

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Sep 22Liked by Kathrine Elaine

Can't wait for the next chapters!

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Ha ha, we read each other’s stories simultaneously! That’s weirdly cool!🩶 I usually scroll through my mailbox and read what ‘speaks’ to me at that exact moment, knowing the authors style and genre. Felt like reading your story. It was good, but I need a part two.

Thank you for reading my story!☺️

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Sep 22Liked by Kathrine Elaine

I noticed that! so cool!☺️ And thank you so much, I appreciate that! And no problem, your first chapter was fantastic!

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Sep 22Liked by Kathrine Elaine

I’m loving this! Rem is an interesting and flawed character

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Thank you! Rem is a very ‘grey’ character. Let’s torture him some more! Muahahaaa! 😅

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Sep 21Liked by Kathrine Elaine

The beginning of another wonderful story... thank you!

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Interesting start, and in the same realm as your previous story I read. Looking forward to more.

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Wow! What a promising beginning for a novella! I'm looking forward to what comes next.

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Thank you!🩶

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Sep 21Liked by Kathrine Elaine

Troubling, sharply tragic. I liked it.

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Thank you for reading!🩶

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While there's still a couple minor slip-ups near the end, this reads much improved to the version you shared earlier this year. That extra time in the proverbial oven paid off in a big way. Can't wait to see what little changes you've made to the next couple chapters!

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