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Oct 5Liked by Kathrine Elaine

I have no doubts that Erko's granddaughter would be a great swordsman. I like that you showed her losing her strength near the end.

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Wow! Twists and turns galore, and very engaging characters.

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Good story. The dynamics of the two main characters really stand out here. Very classic. I look forward to how the rest of the story unfolds.

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I wonder if it is possible to get the dialogue in a slightly different color, easier to find and read.

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