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Karen Novak's avatar

Standing ovation! This is immersive both in your characterization and sheer gorgeousness of your language. I am hooked. More please.

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Kathrine Elaine's avatar

Wow, thank you.🩶 I myself didn’t think it was all that good. I think the last week’s chapter was better.🤷‍♀️ I’m the harshest critic of my stories.😅

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Karen Novak's avatar

I have been at this writing thing for 50 years, and I’ve never met a writer who didn’t doubt their worthiness to call themselves “writer.” I think that may be because the more we learn about our craft, the more we realize how much we don’t know. All I can tell you is that your words have wings that work. Keep going.

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Jeannine's avatar

This is turning out to be great!

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Kathrine Elaine's avatar

😉

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Nevena Pascaleva's avatar

What kind of soldiers are these? Enhanced humans?

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Kathrine Elaine's avatar

Yep. ☺️

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Nevena Pascaleva's avatar

So I guessed right 🙂

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