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The Man Behind the Screen's avatar

I love the snippets of lore here, they do a lot to further flesh out the details of the Lake Autumna region we got in the prior handful of stories. That does come with a bit of a strange feeling in that the narrative reads like this would be the first book in the series when it's clearly not, but that's simply an effect of this being the first written for it and doesn't take away from how engaging this is. The pacing is strong, the characters interesting, and the stakes and lore kept me hooked. I've always looked forward to the stories you've set in this world, but this has me feeling about as excited for the next entry as "The Last Daughter of Wolves" did, which is still my favorite of your stories. Great work, Kat!

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The Black Knight's avatar

This is delightfully post apoc fantastic :D

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Rob Mortell's avatar

I'm glad I stumbled across this story this morning. This is a great start. The world building is fantastic as well as the setup for the plot. You have my attention and I'm excited to read more!

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Kathrine Elaine's avatar

Thank you so much 🩶

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Reda Rountree (she/her)'s avatar

I’m excited to read more!

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Kathrine Elaine's avatar

Thank you for reading it! I will share it on Saturdays, a chapter per week. 🩶

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Joseph L. Wiess's avatar

This is a great start to an exciting story. I can't wait to see how it progresses.

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Kathrine Elaine's avatar

Wow, thank you!🩶 I was afraid it would flop miserably.

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