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Joseph L. Wiess's avatar

oh-oh...they is doomed now. When you shout to the gods that you don't want a woman and she, a man, the gods work against you until you get married.

I can't believe you wrote this first because it reads like something you wrote after getting experience in storytelling.

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Kathrine Elaine's avatar

Hehehe…. the gods (or the Foreverold in this case) will make them suffer for their stubborness.😏

Thank you for reading it 🩶

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Jeannine Lawall's avatar

"I don't want a wife." "And I don't need a husband!" They are now doomed. 😅 This story is getting more and more interesting! 💜

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Kathrine Elaine's avatar

Thank you!🩶 I had forgotten how long the chapters of this story were. A bit too long perhaps. Editing takes forever!😅 (I had set this story aside and didn’t touch it for a year, I think.)

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Jeannine Lawall's avatar

I liked the long chapter, it felt like a special bonus. 😉

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Rob Mortell's avatar

Really entertaining. I enjoy the retort and relationship building. The rescue scene was well done. Can't wait to read more.

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