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svndavn's avatar

I’ve been reading the later chapters you posted and decided to start from the beginning. Love this intro to the story! It’s one of my favorites on Substack

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The Brothers Krynn's avatar

The fact they're complaining about Jewel going after the boring guy, shows they're curious as to why, which means he's not boring, which means he's interesting, which means.... I'm sorry I couldn't resist at least one trolling post.

Interesting first chapter, kind of reminiscent of Jane Austen in a humorous way am curious to see where it leads.

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Kathrine Elaine's avatar

Bingo! Jane Austen is one of the sources of inspiration for these fantasy romances!😅

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The Brothers Krynn's avatar

Interesting! I like that, will read more!

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Von's avatar

I assume you mean 'her hair'.

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Kathrine Elaine's avatar

Thank you, a good catch. Though next time, would you please DM me about my mistakes and typos? I know my writing is far from perfect, but I really don’t like to be corrected publicly. I am weird like that.🤷‍♀️

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