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You promised me that it was silly. This was very silly, indeed.

Very silly, and a great deal of fun. I laughed out loud at what Fir the witch screamed after getting the faerie dust in her eyes. Fern and Nina are amusingly mischievous and whimsical, but what really stood out was the scene setting and the descriptions. Lines like, "the moon plated the forest leaves in silver," or, "the brown stumps of her teeth were wiggling with tiny worms, squirming, and touching Fern’s handsome fea lips" were excellent.

You were nervous, and that's fair. I asked you to leave your comfort zone, and I'm damn glad I did. Those nerves were wrong, this was a blast to read.

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Thank you, Dave!🩶

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This was fun.

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Thanks, it was fun to write.😅

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She's gonna have to collect a hell of a lot of toads!

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I actually had to google if toads pee at all, because my last biology lesson has been… um… some 20 years ago? 😅🤦‍♀️ hadn’t really been interested in toads over the years.😂

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LOL, I had a frog pee on me once… it’s not a recommended experience.

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😂 oh dear…😂🐸

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Fun!……Besides, you had me at, “Nina, my sweet dew drop, where are you hiding?”

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Great story and beautiful picture!

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