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Something terrible clearly happened in Herki's drug addled state, something which I'm sure he'll blame himself for whether he's responsible for it or not. Did he lose control of the fire within? Did his father or the snakeling creep back in to do something wicked? Did he stumble into and through a window and literally fell into darkness? The characters in your stories have a tendency to grip readers in a way that makes us want to keep going. I want to see where this goes, what fate befell Herki and Ari and everyone else in this game of passions and youthful courtly intrigues.

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